Question

19．书面表达根据图画内容，用英语写一篇约80词的短文，要求完整叙述图画内容，并提出个人看法．
①way home，see，Xiao Ming，bird②throw，stone，pick up
③tree，fall off，hurt，badly，bird④kill，come up，old man，tell，not，again

开头已给出：One day，when Xiao Ming was on his way home，
                                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 One day，when Xiao Ming was on his way home，he saw a bird singing in a tree．  有一天，当小明在回家的路上，他看见一只鸟在树上唱歌．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．
高分句型二
I think we should protect the animals．我认为我们应该保护动物．这是一个宾语从句，I think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 One day，when Xiao Ming was on his way home，he saw a bird singing in a tree．【高分句型一，注意时间状语从句的使用】He was very glad．He thought if he caught it，he would take it home and put it in his cage．So he picked up a stone and threw it at the bird．The bird was badly hurt and fell off the tree．Just then an old man came up to Xiao Ming and told him not to kill birds again．【要点一，描述图片】I think we should protect the animals【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．because animals are our friends．【要点二，自己的看法】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．