Question

7．毕业季即将来临，你校正在举办毕业生英语征文比赛．假如你是唐祎，请根据以下信息用英语写一篇短文，回顾你的学习、生活经历，并谈谈对未来的打算．

注意：1．内容必须包括图中所有信息，可展开思路，适当发挥；条理清楚、语句连贯；
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3．词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
My name is Tangyi．I went to primary school in 2007．I had many hobbies and joined different interest groups in the school．In 2011，I invited many friends to my 10th birthday party．We had a very good time．
In 2013，I entered middle school．I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite．Except for study，I took part in many school activities．I remembered an unforgettable school trip to Xuanwu Lake Park．We had a picnic and played games there，singing and chatting．Besides，I am a member of the Sports Club．I think doing sports can make me healthier．
I hope I can go to my dream school for further study after my graduation．I want to be a doctor in the future．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite我学了很多学科花了很多时间学习英语因为是我最喜欢的．
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
I think doing sports can make me healthier我认为做运动能让我更健康．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．

解答 My name is Tangyi．I went to primary school in 2007．I had many hobbies and joined different interest groups in the school．In 2011，I invited many friends to my 10th birthday party．We had a very good time．
In 2013，I entered middle school．I studied many subjects and spent a lot of time on English because it's my favourite【高分句型一】．Except for study，I took part in many school activities．I remembered an unforgettable school trip to Xuanwu Lake Park．We had a picnic and played games there，singing and chatting．Besides，I am a member of the Sports Club．I think doing sports can make me healthier．【高分句型二】（学习、生活经历）
I hope I can go to my dream school for further study after my graduation．I want to be a doctor in the future．（未来的打算．）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．