Question

【题目】书面表达（计10分）

亲爱的同学们，三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，你们即将离开熟悉的母校和三年来朝夕相处并给予你们无尽关爱和帮助的老师们。请根据下面表格的内容，谈谈你熟悉的英语老师。

My English Teacher

Name	Ms.Li
Age	35
Looks	tall, beautiful, long curly hair
Hobbies	reading, singing, dancing, playing sports
Character（性格）	patient, friendly, warm-hearted
My comment（评价）	a good teacher, a friend, a mother

要求：1、文中不能出现真实学校和老师真实姓名。

2、语言要通顺，表达要正确。

3、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

4、词数不少于60个英语单词。

5、文章开头已给出，不计入词数。

I have met many excellent teachers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms. Li.

Answer 1

【答案】

I have met many excellent teachers in junior school. One of them is my English teacher. Her name is Ms. Li She is about thirty-five years old . She is not only tall but also beautiful. She has long curly hair Ms. Li also has a lot of hobbies, such as reading, singing, dancing, playing sports. She is very patient with us .We all think she is a friendly and warm-hearted teacher. Ms. Li is a good teacher. She is like a friend of ours. And sometime she is also like our mother. We all love her.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知主要用一般现在时态，

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯。虽然语言简练但是表达表达清楚、内容完整。应用到了连词：not only but also, 举例短语such as等。