Question

1．B．为迎接国际慈善日（the International Day of Charity）的到来，某英文报刊将要举办有奖征文活动，请你以 I would like to           for charity 为题写篇短文 （词数 80～100），为本次活动投稿．步骤与要点如下：
1．确定主题，并在文中说明原因；
2．围绕主题，进行叙述；
3．写出具体计划，也可以讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历．
要求：
1．补全题目 （参考词汇：sell old things，hold a book fair，pick up rubbish，organize an activity 等）；
2．字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；
3．鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．作文中可以写出具体计划内容，也可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，但要注意时态的运用；如果参照短文中的内容，不可以直接引用短文中的句子；
5．作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名．
I would like togive my love for charity
The International Day of Charity is coming．Many people will do something for it．What should I do？Here are my ideas．
I would like to …give my love for charity．When someone is starving to death，just a little food and water from you may save his life．Again，when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty，just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life．In these case stances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed．
We should offer our help to all the needed．We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others．So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help，don't hesitate to give your love to him．I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
We should offer our help to all the needed．我们应该为所有需要的人提供我们的帮助．
offer one's help to 提供帮助
句型二：
We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others．我们希望得到别人的爱，我们也给予他人爱，．
expect to do期望做某事
get…from sb从某人那得到…
 give sth to sb给某人某物

解答 I would like to give my love for charity．
The International Day of Charity is coming．Many people will do something for it．What should I do？Here are my ideas．
I would like to give my love for charity．（主题）When someone is starving to death，just a little food and water from you may save his life．Again，when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty，just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life．In these case stances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed．（原因）
We should offer our help to all the needed．【高分句型一】（建议）We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others．【高分句型二】So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help，don't hesitate to give your love to him．I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in．（希望）

点评 写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．