Question

书面表达：15 分。请以’Loving all living things’为题，写一篇短文，字数80左右。要点如下：1.地球上拥有各种生物，例如（such as）：人、动物、花草树木等（and so on）。 2.生活在同一个地球上，要互相关爱。 3.我们对别人要有礼貌，任何时候不要生气(angry) 4.时时想着帮助苦难的人。 5.不要随意在草地上玩耍，爱护小动物。6.阻止人们砍伐森林。7.动物像人一样，害怕死亡,要善待它们,不要任意杀害。8.努力使地球变得越来越美。

Loving all living things

Answer 1

Earth is our only home in universe.If we don't protect it from now on,we will have nowhere to go when the environment being ruin. We have allkinds of life,such as poeple, animals ,trees and flowers and so on. We must care for them.We should be plite to others, and don’t be angry.We have to help the people who are in trouble.We can’t play on the grass, and we should be friendly to the animals. people should be stopped to cut down trees.The animals are our friends,we can’t kill the animals. Everyone should do something to make our earth more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如We have to help the people who are in trouble. Everyone should do something to make our earth more beautiful.等，from now on等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。