Question

【题目】假如你上周参加了学校的运动会。长跑比赛中发生了一件使你难忘的事情。在运动 会总结班会上，你讲述了事情的经过并表达自己的感受。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。 要点如下:

(1)一开始，紧张，感到不舒服。

(2)跑步时，遇到麻烦，胃痛严重。

(3)摔倒在地。

(4)同学加油，老师鼓励，不放弃。

(5)最后成功冲过终点线。

(6)尽管没有获奖，但感到骄傲。

(7)表达自己的一点感受。

要求:(1)词数 80~100。

(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

(3)文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

(4)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:终点线 finishing line

Boys and girls,

I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls,

I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week. At first, I got so nervous that I felt awful all over. Even worse, I got into trouble keeping running as a result of a serious stomachache. When my teachers and students saw me fall down, they cheered me on and encouraged me never to give up. Thanks to their help, I successfully crossed the finishing line. Even though I didn’t win a prize for my class and felt a little disappointed, I was proud of myself for the reason that I managed to overcome the difficulty.

As teenagers, we may suffer from troubles in our life from time to time. What we should do is to spare no effort to achieve our goal. It will certainly help us grow as a person.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be pleased to do，I’d like to do，talk about，all over，get good grades，be willing to do，even worse，as a result of，fall down，Thanks to，Even though，be proud of，suffer from，time to time等。而I’m very pleased to speak here and I’d like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week./ At first, I got so nervous that I felt awful all over./When my teachers and students saw me fall down, they cheered me on and encouraged me never to give up.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。