Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫Mei Mei，在英语学习网站上看见一个帖子，一个叫Susan的美国学生，平时学习非常刻苦勤奋，但是上次考试却没有得到高分，心情很糟糕。请根据下面的提示，给她写一封回帖。

1.心情不好是可以理解的。

2.想得到高分没错，但学习的目的主要是学到更多的知识，而不仅仅是好成绩。

3.提出建议：（1）要与老师、朋友和家人一起分忧，找到适合自己的学习方法。

（2）不要过于担心，要放松心态。如：可在周末走进大自然，欣赏美景。或者…….

（3）对自己要有自信。

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3）词数：80词左右（回帖的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

Dear Susan,

As we all know, many students like you care a lot about their grades in exams.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Susan,

As we all know, many students like you care a lot about their grades in exams. They all want to get high marks, But you should know the goal of studying is to improve our knowledge.

The aim of exams is letting us know how much we know, why we lost the points, then, we should improve ourselves . We can share our worries with our parents and teachers. We can ask other students the problems that we don’t understand. Be hard-working and try our best to get higher marks in the next exam.

My advice is that you should be relaxed before exams. Don’t be worried too much. Try your best. You can also enjoy the beauty outside at the weekends. Believe in yourself!

Wish you good luck!

Loves from

HamMei

【解析】

试题分析：本题目要求写的是回复信件，所以要注意信件的格式，结尾的署名和问候致意。要包括的内容要有安慰和考试目的，要有建议。还要注意内容的连贯性。要用一般现在时第一人称。

写作亮点：这篇短文重点突出，详略得当；内容齐全，语言形式丰富多姿，运用了as we all know ,doing zuo 表语，复合句，祈使句等多种句子结构，给阅读者一种全新的感觉。