Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下表提示，以My friend为题写一篇短文。

基本情况	Millie，12岁， 英国人 阳光中学七年级一班学生
服装打扮	粉色或蓝色衣服，看起来既现代又漂亮
兴趣爱好	喜欢听音乐，擅长画画
学习情况	学习努力，最喜欢的学科是历史 经常帮助同学学功课,
生活方式	喜欢吃汉堡和巧克力，很少进行体育运动 （你觉得该是她改变生活方式的时候了，并提出至少两条建议。）

注意：1．词数80左右 。

2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Friend

I have a friend. Her name is Millie. She is twelve years old. She is from England but she lives in Nantong now. She studies in Yang Guang Middle School. She is in Class One, Grade Seven. She wears pink or blue clothes, and looks modern and beautiful. She likes listening to music and she is good at drawing. She works hard. Her favorite subject is history. She often helps classmates do homework. She likes eating hamburgers and chocolate, and she seldom exercises. So she is fat and unhealthy. I think she should change her living habits. She had better eat more vegetables and fruit and less meat or hamburgers. She should do some sports such as running and swimming. In this way, she will have a healthy life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友Millie。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Her name is...，She is...，She likes...，She often helps...，She should...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍基本情况、服装打扮、兴趣爱好、学习情况和生活方式，最后建议她改变生活习惯。此处用了be from, live in, like doing sth, be good at doing sth, help sb do sth, in this way, have a healthy life等这些词组，也让文章增色不少。