Question

简单介绍自己及自己的家人, 包括名字，英文名，年龄，职业，爱好。注意不得出现中文和班级。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My name is Li Gang. I’m 12 years old. I’m interested in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. My father is a teacher. His name is Li Hongzhi. He is 36 years old. His hobby is to climb the mountains. My mother is a nurse. Her name is Fan Bingbing. She is 35 years old. She likes cooking and she often cooks all kinds of delicious food for us. This makes my father and me very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一，三人称，主要用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单. 主要是系表结构及主谓宾结构的使用。但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对我的朋友有了一个比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。

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