百善孝为先 . 身教胜于言传．请根据所提供的信息与提示词.以 What my father does moves me deeply! 为题.用英语写一篇短文．内容要点:1．奶奶把爸爸抚养大不容易.现在年龄大了.很需要照顾,2．爸爸是个孝顺的儿子．无论他多忙.他-,3．孝敬老人是中华民族的传统美德.爸爸所做的为我树立了好榜样,4．我要向爸爸学习.并� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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4．"百善孝为先"，"身教胜于言传"．请根据所提供的信息与提示词，以"What my father does moves me deeply!"为题，用英语写一篇短文．

内容要点：
1．奶奶把爸爸抚养大不容易，现在年龄大了，很需要照顾；
2．爸爸是个孝顺的儿子．无论他多忙，他…；
3．孝敬老人是中华民族的传统美德，爸爸所做的为我树立了好榜样；
4．我要向爸爸学习，并尽我所能和家人一起分担家务．
提示词：raise（抚养），filial（孝顺的），set an example to（为…树立榜样），virtue（美德），respecting elderly people（孝敬老人）
写作要求：
1．短文必须陈述以上四个方面的内容，其中第二方面至少写出体现父亲孝心的三件事；
2．所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数不少于80词（不含已给出的句子的词数）；
3．短文中不得出现真空的姓名、校名和地名；
4．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．
What my father does moves me deeply
Look at the picture，my father is washing feet for my grandma．What my father is doing moves me very much．Yes，it's not easyfor my grandma to raise my father and now she is too old to look after herself．My father is a filial son．No matter how busy he is，he always spends some time with my grandma every day．He usually talks with my grandma，helps her do some chores and helps her wash feet every evening．
Respecting elderly people is virtue of Chinese and my father sets an example to me．I will learn from my father and try as possibly as I can to share housework with my family．．

分析这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"What my father does moves me deeply!"为题说说父亲让你感动的事情．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．奶奶把爸爸抚养大不容易，现在年龄大了，很需要照顾；
2．爸爸是个孝顺的儿子．无论他多忙，他…；
3．孝敬老人是中华民族的传统美德，爸爸所做的为我树立了好榜样；
4．我要向爸爸学习，并尽我所能和家人一起分担家务
常用到的重点短语：
too…to do sth 太…而不能
look after 照顾
spend …with sb 和某人一起度过
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
as possibly as sb can尽可能的
share …with sb 与某人分担
【高分句型】
1．Yes，①it's not easy for my grandma to raise my father and now she is ②too old to look after herself．
①it is+adj+for sb+to do sth，it 是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
②too…to do sth 太…而不能，做某事；look after 照顾

2．①No matter how busy he is，he always ②spends some time with my grandma every day．
①No matter how 无论怎样，引导的让步状语从句．
②spend …with sb 和某人一起度过

3．I will learn from my father and ①try ②as possibly as I can to ③share housework with my family．
①try to do sth 尽力做某事
②as possibly as I can尽可能的
③share …with sb 与某人分担

解答 What my father does moves me deeply
Look at the picture，my father is washing feet for my grandma．What my father is doing moves me very much．
Yes，it's not easy for my grandma to raise my father and now she is too old to look after herself．【高分句型】（奶奶把爸爸抚养大不容易，现在年龄大了，很需要照顾） My father is a filial son．No matter how busy he is，he always spends some time with my grandma every day．【高分句型】He usually talks with my grandma，helps her do some chores and helps her wash feet every evening．（父亲的孝心）
Respecting elderly people is virtue of Chinese and my father sets an example to me．（孝敬老人是中华民族的传统美德，爸爸所做的为我树立了好榜样）I will learn from my father and try as possibly as I can to share housework with my family．【高分句型】（我要向爸爸学习，并尽我所能和家人一起分担家务）（我的感想）

点评这是一篇给材料作文．材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题．结合材料可知本文主要用一般将来时态进行叙述，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．