Question

9．在初中的三年里，你参加过各种不同形式的社团活动．有的活动给你留下了深刻的印象．请你以"           leaves me a deep impression"为标题，写一篇文章，描述你印象最深刻的一次活动以及你的收获．
要求：
1．语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺．标题中横线上需填上相应的活动名称．
2．词数80词左右，文中不能出现能透露考生真实身份的任何信息．
         leaves me a deep impression
                  ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
With his help，I fixed one and succeeded in flying．
with one's help 在某人的帮助下；succeed in doing sth 成功做某事．这句话意为：在他的帮助下，我安装好了一个，并成功放飞．
高分句型二：
By making model planes I learn that no matter what I do，I must keep doing it even though it fails again and again．
no matter  无论； keep doing sth 一直做某事；even though 即使．这句话意为：通过制作飞机模型我认识到，无论做什么，我必须一直努力，即使一次又一次地失败．

解答 Making model planes  leaves me a deep impression
      I have taken part in many outdoor activities during the past three years．Some of them have left me deep impression，especially making plane models．（开篇点题）
      One day，Mr．Ma told us to Room 202 to make model planes．After class，I went there and took the parts of a model plane to fix it．Soon I made one，unluckily it couldn't fly．I was a little worried and tried another time，it failed again，I was very sad．Just at that time，a student came to me and told me the skills of fixing．With his help，I fixed one and succeeded in flying．【高分句型一】（描述事件）
     By making model planes I learn that no matter what I do，I must keep doing it even though it fails again and again．【高分句型二】Besides it is important for members to help each other．（我的收获）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．