Question

【题目】在广州，越来越多学生骑共享单车（the shared bikes）上学。如今共享单车到处都有。它给我们的出行带来了很多便利，但也带来了一些问题。请你根据以下提示给学校英文报社写一篇英文报道，谈谈你对共享单车的看法。

优势	●使用方便，用手机即可解锁； ●便宜，半小时只需0.5元；
不良现象	●随处乱停； ●有人偷车/破坏车；
你的观点	？（至少一个理由）

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注意：1.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）；

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

注：1.随处乱停 park…disorderly?? 2.解锁 unlock

In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere.

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Answer 1

【答案】In Guangzhou, more and more students begin to ride the shared bikes to school. We can see those bikes everywhere. Surely, they bring us a lot of convenience while a lot of problems take place at the same time as well.

Students like them because of the following reasons. First, it’s very convenient to use the shared bikes. They can unlock the shared bikes by simply using their phones. Second, it’s cheap to rent the shared bikes. It only costs 0.5 yuan for half an hour.

However, there are some problems as well. Some people park the bikes disorderly. Some people break the bikes on purpose or even steal the bikes.

In my opinion, people should learn how to use the shared bikes properly so that it can make our life easier and our city better.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，要表达共享单车的便利和问题以及你对共享单车的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如surely, convenience, while, take place, as well, first, second, cost, however, on purpose以及in my opinion。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。