Question

今年我省出台了系列推进素质教育的新政，其中对学生的作息时间做了严格规定。学生课外时间增多了，他们都在干些什么？他们的负担减轻了吗？下面是English Online杂志社就这些问题对某市部分初中生进行问卷调查的结果。请根据该调查结果写一份80～100词的调查报告，并简单谈谈你的意见和看法。文章的开头已给出，不计入词数。

How many students	60%	5%	15%	20%
What do they do	Study, read books or do homework	Watch TV	Play computer games	Do sports or play outdoors

English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time. Here is the result.

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Answer 1

English Online made a survey on what junior middle school students do in their spare time. Here is the result.

After school, 60% of them study and read books or do homework at home. 5% watch TV and 15% play computer games. 20% do sports or play outdoors with classmates or friends.

Things are much better than before, but still about 60% of students are busy studying in their free time. Study is not the only important things for children. Playing is important for them, too. By playing, children can keep healthy, and can learn things that they can’t get from books. So children need more time to do different kinds of activities.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们根据该调查结果写一份80～100词的调查报告，并简单谈谈我们的意见和看法。在题目中给了我们这篇报告的写作提纲：一、60%的学生业余时间会学习、看书或做作业；5%的学生会看电视；15%的学生会玩电脑游戏；20%的学生会进行体育活动或者户外玩。二、谈下我们自己的看法。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据表格所列出的调查结果，详细准确地进行了讲述，并表述自己的看法。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Study is not the only important things for children.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如Things are much better than before, but still about 60% of students are busy studying in their free time.等。

考点：提纲类作文。