Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设Tom是你远在英国的朋友，请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述一下他们一家人使用交通工具的情况。

1. Tom的学校离家5公里，他经常骑自行车去上学；下雨时坐公交车。

2. 妈妈在医院工作，医院离家有点远，每天坐地铁去上班，大约花半小时。

3. 爸爸在工厂工作，工厂离家很远，每天开车去上班，大约花40分钟。

Answer 1

【答案】Tom is my friend from England. He is a student in a middle school. The school is about five kilometers from his home. He usually goes there by bike. When it rains, he takes a bus. How about his parents? His father works in a factory. It’s very far, so he has to drive there every day. It takes him about forty minutes. His mother works in a hospital. It’s a bit far. She often goes there by subway. She spends about half an hour.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，描述汤姆一家人使用交通工具的情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如middle school, about, five kilometers from, by bike, take a bus, how about, have to, a bit等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。