Question

【题目】书面表达（共1小题；满分15分）

清明节（Tomb-sweeping Day / The Qingming Festival）有着悠久的历史和文化，国家一直在提倡以文明节俭的方式来过传统节日，请你描述看到过的不好的纪念活动和现象，提出建议并说明原因。

现象	建议
购买很多物品，花费较大；	以鲜花代替其它祭奠物品；
大吃大喝，浪费食物；	以网络祭奠的方式；
燃放烟花爆竹，污染环境，甚至引发火灾；	以植树的方式；

注意：

1. 文章必须包含表格中的内容，可适当增加细节。

2. 词数：80~100。

3. 短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

短文首句：Tomb-sweeping Day is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.

参考词汇：燃放烟花爆竹set off firework，网络祭奠 hold network memorial ceremonies,

引发火灾 cause fire

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Answer 1

【答案】

Tomb-sweeping Day is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. On April 5th, people start to visit their ancestors’ tombs. Generally speaking, people will bring the home-made food, some fake money and paper-made mansion to their ancestors. When they start to honour their ancestor, they will light up some candles and incense, put some flowers around the tombs. The most important thing is to put the home-made food in front of the tombs. The food, also known as sacrifices, is usually made up with a chicken, a fish and some pork. It’s a symbol of the offspring’s respect to the ancestors. On that day people spend much money buying a lot of goods. They eat and drink and waste lots of food. They set off fireworks polluting the environment, or even causing a fire. I think they can take other items instead of flowers to pay homage to. They can also pay homage to the network. They can plant trees to honour their ancestor.

【解析】

写作亮点：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

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