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2．南丁格尔是一个心地善良、乐于助人的人，她终生奉献于护士事业，为纪念她，人们把她的生日5月12日定为世界护士日（International Nurses Day），请你依据下面的信息，写一篇短文简要介绍她的生平．
要求：1．文章字数在80-100词之间，可根据要点作适当发挥．
2．文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息．

1820	be born，in a rich family
1851	be trained
During the war	save soldiers'lives，the front hospitals
After the war	become a national hero，open the world's first nurse school
1910	die
1974	become，International Nurses Day

A famous British nurse-Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse．She was born in a rich family on May 12，1820．She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others，especially the sick．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．During the war，she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers'lives．When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．Later，Florence Nightingale opened the world's first nurse school．Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910．In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是简要介绍南丁格尔的生平．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.1820年出生于一个富裕的家庭
2.1851年接受培训
3．战争期间：拯救战士的生命，在前线医院
4．战争后：成为国际英雄，开办了世界上第一所护士学校
5.1910年去世
6.1974．她的生日定为世界护士日
常用到的重点短语：
be born 出生
come back 返回
be ready to do sth 乐于做某事
because of 因为
【高分句型】
1．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．
一般过去时的被动语态，was/were+过去分词．
2．When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．
when引导的时间状语从句．
3．In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day ①because of the great love and help ②she gave to people．
①because of 因为，由于，of是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
②省略了关系词which的定语从句，修饰先行词love and help，which作为宾语故省略．

解答 A famous British nurse-Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse．She was born in a rich family on May 12，1820．（出生日和家庭）She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others，especially the sick．In 1851，she was trained as a nurse．【高分句型】（训练）During the war，she went to help in the front hospitals and saved many soldiers'lives．（战争期间拯救战士生命）When she came back after the war，she became a national hero．【高分句型】Later，Florence Nightingale opened the world's first nurse school．（战争后成为英雄开办学校）Florence Nightingale died in London in 1910．（去世）In 1974，her birthday became International Nurses Day because of the great love and help she gave to people．【高分句型】（世界护士日）

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少