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【题目】书面表达

目前很多学生忙于功课，为了能学得更好，有些学生增加了大量的课外辅导班，如何让学校生活更精彩更有意义是困扰很多学生的问题。作为即将毕业的初中学生，学校请你结合自己的做法，给其他学生做个演讲，谈谈你的看法。以“How to become a successful middle school student”为题。请你根据以下表格内的提示, 准备一份英语发言稿。

What to do	How to do it
培养良好的习惯	认真听讲，积极参与 及时复习，从错误中吸取教训
体育锻炼	……
其他方面	严格遵守校规校纪 如果需要，理智选择课外辅导班 ……

注意事项：

1. 发言稿须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 除表格提供的建议外，必须再写出1-2条建议，并做适当发挥；

3. 词数在90个左右，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone! It is my great honor to be here to share with you my opinions on how to become a successful middle school student. A great number of students are busy with their lessons and even some students have to go to extra classes after school. How can we study more effectively and be successful? Here are some suggestions.

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All in all, a successful middle school student can well balance study and hobbies. No pains, no gains. With your great efforts, you will become a successful middle school student.

Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Firstly, developing the good learning habits is of great importance. We are supposed to have good learning habits. I often listen to my teachers carefully in class and take an active part in the class. Every day I go over what has been taught in time after class. And I often learn from mistakes instead of being afraid of making mistakes.

Secondly, it’s helpful for our study to have good health. I spend at least an hour doing exercise every day.

Thirdly, strictly following the school rules will help you. (School rules are made to make sure that every student is safe at school). Besides, You’d better choose the extra classes wisely if necessary. Don’t make yourself too tired with lessons. If you have some problems, you should ask the teachers or classmates for help. (We’d better make good use of time. )

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据表格内的提示，以“How to become a successful middle school student”为题，写一份英语发言稿。本文人称主要是第一人称和第二人称，时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读所给提示，所给提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，注意使用表达顺序词（Firstly，Secondly, Thirdly, Besides）。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

首先，培养良好的学习习惯非常重要。我们应该有良好的学习习惯。我经常在课堂上认真听老师的话，积极参加课堂活动。每一天，我都会在课后复习课后所学的东西。我经常从错误中学习，而不是害怕犯错。

其次，它有助于我们的学习健康。我每天至少花一个小时做运动。

第三，严格遵守校规会对你有所帮助。（学校规定要确保每个学生在学校都安全）。另外，如果必要的话，你最好明智地选择额外的课程。不要让自己对功课感到疲倦。如果你有问题，你应该向老师或同学求助。（我们最好好好利用时间。）