Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫李华，现在的你和以前已经改变了许多。请根据表格提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你的不同之处。词数100-120个左右。

	In the past	Now
Appearance	short, fat, short hair	tall, thin, long hair
Personality	shy/ silent,	outgoing/ active
Study	ask the teacher for help	study with a group
Favorite festival	The Mid- Autumn Festival …	The Spring Festival …
hobbies	like…/ hate …	like…/ hate…

How I’ve changed!

People sure changed, I have changed a lot in the last few years.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How I’ve changed

My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very short, fat but now I’m much taller and thinner than before. Now I have long hair, but I used to have short hair. I was shy and silent, but now I much more outgoing and active.

I liked the Mid- Autumn Festival best in the past, but now my favorite festival is the Spring Festival. Another change is that now I study with a group. However, I used to ask the teacher for help when I had some difficulty in studying. The biggest change in my life was my hobby. I used to watch cartoon on TV, now I like soap opera. I didn’t use to like English class, even hate it. But now it’s my favorite class. I used to play with my friend after school every day. Now I have no time, I just study all the time.

All in all, I’m happy with these changes, because they have brought me the happiness of growth.

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我发生的变化。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I used to...；but now my favorite festival is ...；But now it’s ...及 I’m happy with ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最近有一些变化，接下来介绍我的外貌、性格、学习和爱好的变化，最后对自己的变化感到高兴。此处ask sb for sth, have difficulty in doing sth, play with , all the time等这些词组以及连词but, and 和however的运用也让文章增色不少。