Question

【题目】写作

目前，我们的孩子面临着许多危险。这些危险让我们的父母很担心。作为一名学生，请你根据以下信息，给某英文报写一篇短文，就青少年的安全问题谈谈你的看法和建议。

现状	1. 校车事故多次发生，许多孩子丧生。 2. 市场上到处可见不安全的食品，危害孩子的健康。 3. 网上不健康的网站，对青少年有不良影响。 4. ……
建议	1. 制定新的校车规则来保证孩子的安全 2. 注重食品安全，不吃不安全的食品，同时阻止厂家生产这样的食品。 3. …… 4. ……

要求：

1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等；

3）词数：100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数）；

4）建议措施不少于两点。

Nowadays, many parents are worrying about their children’s safety.

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If we do so, the children in our country will be safer.

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, many parents often worry about their children because of the safety problems. For example, the school bus accidents have taken place many times. Many children were killed. The unsafe food in the market can be seen everywhere. It is harmful to the children’s health. What’ s more, the bad websites on the Internet are bad for the children .

In order to protect the children, we should make new schoolbus rules to protect the safety of the children. Don’t allow anyone to produce any unsafe food. We mustn’t sell or buy such unsafe food, and we should stay away from the bad websites.

If we do so, the children in our country will be safer.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求根据表格内信息，给某英文报写一篇短文，就青少年的安全问题谈谈你的看法和建议。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如For example, the school bus accidents have taken place many times. What’ s more, the bad websites on the Internet are bad for the children . We mustn’t sell or buy such unsafe food, and we should stay away from the bad websites.被动语态Many children were killed.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。