题目内容
11.假定你是李磊,针对目前许多学生睡眠不足的现状,你希望学校取消早读课(Morning reading class )以保证学生有充足的睡眠.请你用英语向校长写一封信,描述你在睡眠方面遇到的问题,并提出你的建议.具体内容包括:1.近况:状况看似良好.
2.问题:睡眠严重不足.
3.原因:作业太多,睡觉时间太迟,早上起得太早…
4.恳求:取消早读.
注意:词数80字左右.
开头语已写出,不计词数.
Dear schoolmaster,
I'm very glad that I can study in such a good school,It seems that I am getting along with myself very well,but
sleep is a serious problem,I am so sleepy that I almost fall asleep in class,I can't listen to the teacher carefully,and my teacher is angry,too.I have so much homework to do at night,I can't go to bed untill 11:00 andI must get up at half past five in the morning.I am so tired and sleepy every day.Could you please cancel morningreadingclassso that the students can sleep more?
Yours,
LiLei.
分析 此作文要求写一封信.时态用一般现在时态.动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,句式等问题.题中包含了这些要点:①近况:状况看似良好;②问题:睡眠严重不足;③作业太多,睡觉时间太迟,早上起得太早.④恳求:取消早读.注意不要遗漏要点,句子要通顺连贯,没有语法错误.
高分句型一
I am so sleepy that I almost fall asleep in class 我太困了,几乎在课上睡着了.so …that如此…以至于,中间是形容词.
高分句型二
Could you please cancel morning reading class so that the students can sleep more?你能取消晨读课,让学生们多睡一会儿吗?Could you please …表示委婉客气的请求,后跟动词原形.so that 在这引导目的状语从句,为了,以便于.
解答 Dear schoolmaster,
I'm very glad that I can study in such a good school,It seems that I am getting along with myself very well【要点一】,but sleep is a serious problem,I am so sleepy that I almost fall asleep in class【高分句型一,so …that句型的使用】,I can't listen to the teacher carefully,and my teacher is angry,too【要点二】.I have so much homework to do at night,I can't go to bed untill 11:00 and I must get up at half past five in the morning.I am so tired and sleepy every day【要点三】.Could you please cancel morning reading class so that the students can sleep more【高分句型二,Could you please 句型的使用】?【要点四】
Yours,
LiLei
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,多阅读此类题材,将词汇归类整理;动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词.写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
| A. | What | B. | What a | C. | How | D. | How a |
However,there are different kinds of stress.Some kinds of stress are good and others are bad.Good stress might happen when you are called to answer questions in class or when you have to give a speech in public.This kind of stress can help you to get things better done.For example,you may do a better job on your test if the stress pushes you to prepare better before the test.
On the other hand,bad stress can happen if the stress lasts too long.You may not feel well if a family member is ill,if you are having problems at school,or if anything else makes you unhappy every day.That kind of stress isn't going to help you.And it can actually make you sick.
The best way to fight the stress is to have a balanced life.Make sure you keep yourself in mind:Sleep,Exercise,Leisure(休闲),and Food.If you get enough sleep and eat healthily,and if you exercise and leave time to have fun,you will feel less stressed.
| Title:Face the Stress | ||
| Meaning of stress | Stress is a feeling when you are (56)worriedabout something. | |
| Possible effect | You may feel uncomfortable in your(57)mindand body | |
Different kinds | (58)Good stress | 1.It might happen when you have to(59)speak in public. 2.It will be more possible for you to do the job successfully. 3.It makes you(60)preparebetter before the test. |
| Bad stress | l It might happen if your stress(61)laststoo long. l You may not feel well with the(62)illnessof a family member, problems at school or something else that worries you every day l It might stop you from getting your work well done. | |
| How to(63)keep the stress away | Have a balanced life. l Have enough sleep and have(64)healhty food. l Take exercise and have time to(65)relaxyourself. | |
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