Question

【题目】书面表达

格林夫人正在打扫房间，她在不同的地方发现了很多小东西，对此，她有很多不同的猜测。请根据表格内容，写一篇80～100词的小短文，写出她的推测结果。

物品	猜测	原因
a CD on thesofa	belong to Toby	Dale is his favoritesinger.
a red pencil	can't be Bob's	Blue is his favoritecolor.
a toy bear	don't know	It's too old.
a ring	herself	A birthday gift from her husband.

Answer 1

【答案】Mrs. Green is tidying up the house. She finds some things. There is a CD by Dale on the sofa. She thinks it must belong to Toby because Dale is his favorite singer. He always dreams of attending his concert. A red pencil is found under the shelf. She thinks it can't be Bob's, because blue is his favorite color. What's that behind the door? It's a toy bear. Whose is it? Mrs. Green doesn't know. Because it is too old. She also finds a ring in the drawer. The ring must be herself because it was a birthday gift from her husband. She felt sorry when she found the ring lost one year ago. It is a really surprise to get it back.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍格林夫人正在打扫房间，她在不同的地方发现了很多小东西，对此，她有很多不同的猜测，题目中给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，特别要注意如果主语是第三人称单数的时候，谓语动词形式要变化，还要注意一些表示推测的词汇，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。