Question

【题目】书面表达

践行文明礼仪从我做起。作为一名中学生，我们应该不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a Person with Good Manners”为题，写一篇短文。内容必须包括以下要点：

1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例(时间、地点、人物、经过以及你的看法)；

2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的学生提出自己的建议(至少两点)。

注意：

1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

2. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Be a Person with Good Manners

It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Be a Person with Good Manners

It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.

Last Saturday evening, all my family were enjoying dinner in a restaurant when a group of young people came into it. While they were eating their food, they talked loudly and smoked. I tried to stop them doing so, but they refused to listen to me. Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.

In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion, we should keep quiet in public. Also, we should be polite to others. Only in this way can we be trained to be persons with good manners.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in our daily life，enjoy dinner in a restaurant，try to do，refuse to do，listen to me，laugh at sb.，in fact，be proud of，in my opinion，be polite to others等。同时特殊句式It's very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.和In fact, what they did upset me deeply, but I was proud of what I did. In my opinion,/ Instead, they said it was none of my business and laughed at me.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。