题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共10分)
亲爱的同学,随着你走出本次中考的考场,初中的学习生活就结束了。迎接你的将是近两个月的轻松假期。你想好要在假期中做什么了吗?跟我们分享你的假期计划吧!请以“My summer vacation”为题,用英文写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 和父母去海南(Hainan)旅游;
2. 看电视、听音乐(listen to);
3. 看书、 做些家务(housework);
4. 参考(take part in)一些有意义的活动(meaningful activities), 比如和同学去养老院(the Old People’s Home)看望老人,去农村(the countryside)看望留守儿童(the left-behind children)等;
5. 你的假期将是丰富多彩的(be colorful)。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称;
2. 词数不少于70个,短文题目和开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文应包含以上所有要点,还可以适当发挥。
My summer vacation
The summer vacation is coming. ________________________________________________
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【答案】
My summer vacation
The summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do this vacation?I’m going to Hainan with my parents this summer. I will visit some places of great interest. I am looking forward to meeting the beautiful sea beaches.
Also , I want to watch TV or listen to music that I like in my spear time . I really want to relax
myself. Of course, I will read some books that I want to read. I will also help my parents to do housework.
Besides , I want to take part in a meaningful activity. I want to go to the countryside to visit the left-behind children. I hope I can help them with their homework. and I also hope I can bring them happiness.
I think my holiday will be colorful. I hope I can have a happy vacation. What about you? What are you going to do this summer?
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇利用提纲的给材料作文。所给的材料主要分以下几个个方面:外出旅行, 平时生活,参加活动,对自己假期的评价。根据介绍的是将来的假期活动可知主要用一般将来时态。在写作中注意句式的变化,连词的应用及上下文的衔接。
写作亮点:这篇短文分四部分描述了自己的假期计划。第一部分介绍自己将要去哪里旅行,第二部分是自
己的日常计划,第三部分是想参加的有意义的活动,最后一部分总体评价自己的假期。短文内容切题,意
思连贯,表达清楚、完整。用到了Also , Besides ,及定语从句I want to watch TV or listen to music that I like
in my spear time等这写使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。