Question

请根据以下信息，以My friend 为题写一篇短文。

Name	Jenny
Personality	诚实，有幽默感，保守秘密。喜欢帮助需要帮助的人。
School life	在一所混合学校学习，学习许多不同的学科，学校每年有阅读周。
Future plan	打算旅游 ( 交通方式，时间、地点，计划哪些活动)

 

具体要求：

1. 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。

3. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥。

My friend

I have a good friend called Jenny. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

My Friend

I have a good friend. Called Jenny.She is honest and she has a sense of humor.She often keeps a

secret.She likes to help other people who needs help. She studies in a mixed school, and she learns many different subjects.The school has a reading week every year.She has a travelling plan.She wants to go there by train this weekend. In the morning, she is going to the Great Wall. It's one of the greatest wonders in the world. At noon, she will go to the Summer Palace. There are so many interesting sites, such as Wanshou Mountain, Kunming Lake, Suzhou Street, and some other ancient palaces. Next, she can go

boating on Kunming Lake.In the afternoon, she will go to have a long walk on Tiananman Square, in order to see the city well, and then she can visit the Palace Museum. There she can see different objects

of different periods.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照题目结合表格完成这篇作文，我们要用简单准确的句子把表格中的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含性格，学校生活，旅游计划等内容；要注意表达清楚，可适当发挥描述一下她的旅游计划内容。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容简明、扼要地阐明了自己的好友Jenny的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如: She likes to help other people who needs help.文中还恰当地使用了一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：表格作文。