Question

【题目】书面表达

升入新学年,九年级二班迎来了新英语教师,她的课很有特色。李明和班里其他一些原本不喜欢上英语课的同学,现在有了很大的变化,他们的英语水平也明显提高了。假如你是校英语报的小记者,请你根据下面的提示内容,写一篇短文,介绍李明及班里其他同学的变化。

注意:1. 70词左右。

2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Last term

In class only listened and took notes; had little interest discuss things with others;

After class did lots of homework

This term

ask and solve problems by themselves; take more interest; work hard to improve their English. to do less homework; read English magazines and storybooks; join the Happy English club at school

Great Changes in the English Class

This term, great changes have taken place in Class Two, Grade Nine since the new English teacher, Mrs Yang, came.

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In short, they are doing better than before and they are enjoying themselves at school now.

Answer 1

【答案】This term, great changes have taken place in Class Two, Grade Nine since the new English teacher, Mrs Yang, came. Li Ming and his classmates didn’t use to like English, but now they’re interested in it. They used to only listen to teachers and take notes in class. Now, they discuss things with others and ask and solve problems by themselves. They all work hard to improve their English. They used to have lots of homework to do, but now they have less homework, and they have more time to read English magazines and novels. They have also joined the Happy English club at school. In short, they are doing better than before and they are enjoying themselves at school now.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍李明及班里其他同学的变化。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：They used to……，Now, they discuss……，They all work hard to……，but now they have……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。