题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请根据以下提示写一篇不少于70词的短文。
提示:1. Dennis今天得了重感冒,头痛、发烧;
医生建议他在家休息,多喝水,按时吃药;
你准备放学后去看他,帮他补习功课。
【答案】My friend Dennis didn’t come to school today. He went to hospital because he had a bad cold. He had a headache and a fever. The doctor looked him over and said,“It’s nothing serious. But you have to stay at home for two days. You should drink more water and have a good rest. Take the medicine three times a day. Then you’ll feel better. ”
After school,I’m going to visit him and help him with his lessons. I hope he will be OK very soon.
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如come to school,go to hospital,have a bad cold,have a headache and a fever,look him over,It’s nothing serious,have to do,stay at home,have a good rest,take the medicine等。而He went to hospital because he had a bad cold./ I hope he will be OK very soon.两个从句j结构的运用更是为文章增色不少,是本篇习作的亮点。