Question

11．根据下列提示信息，用英语写一篇不少于80字的日记．
提示：1．著名教授Mr．Bobert今天（6月5日，星期五，晴）上午来你校做了一场报告．
2．其报告内容包括：
•如何与同学友好相处；
•如何与家长老师有效沟通；
•如何控制不了情绪．
3．这场报告对今后的学习和生活都很重要．
要求1．日记中必须包含提示中的所有要点．
2．不要逐句翻译可适当发挥．
3．必须用第一人称写作．
4．条理清晰，书写规范．
5．文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息．
6．日记的开头已经写好，不记不计入总词数．

参考词汇：有效的effectively．教授professor．
Friday，June 5th                                               Sunny
Friday，June5thSunny
This morning Mr．Robert，a famous professor，came to our school to give us a useful report．Mr．Robert told us how we could get along well with our classmates．He said that honesty is the best way．He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers．When he talked about how we can control ourselves，he said，"Count to ten when you get angry．"
　　I learned an important lesson from Mr．Robert．Im sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in future．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It is easy to get on well with others．与别人相处很容易．这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do
sth．句型，对于…来说…是有用的．
高分句型二
I'm sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in the future．我相信他的报告会帮助我们更好地学习，过上更幸福的生活．I'm sure 后是宾语从句，help sb．do sth．帮助某人做某事．

解答 This morning Mr．Robert，a famous professor，came to our school to give us a useful report．【开篇点名主题】Mr．Robert told us how we could get along well with our classmates．It is easy to get on well with others．【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．He said that honesty is the best way．He also taught us how to communicate with our parents and teachers．When he talked about how we can control ourselves，he said，"Count to ten when you get angry．"【报告大致内容】I learned an important lesson from Mr．Robert．I'm sure his report will help us study better and live a happier life in the future【高分句型二，注意宾语句型的使用】．【感受】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑
关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．