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6．《中学生学习报》向广大中学生发起主题为"How to build a harmonious（和谐的） school"的英语征文．假如你是赵明，请根据下面的图表提示给该报编辑写封信，发表自己的看法
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How to build a harmonious school
Dear editor，
Our country calls for everyone to try their best to build a harmonious society．As a student，I think it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．Whatcan wedo to achievethe goal？
First of all，we should try our best to protect the school environment．We are supposed to plant more trees and flowers to make our school more beautiful．We should pick up the litter on the road and throw it into the dustbin．We mustn't pick flowers or step on the grass．Second，we should fill the world with love，we should show respect to our teachers．What's more，we shouldcare for each other andhelp those in need．The most important point is that all of us must be honest in our daily life．Finally，we should obey the school rules and play an active part in school activies．
Let's start right now to build a harmonious school．
Yours，
Zhao Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
As a student，I think it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．
句中"it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．"为宾语从句，使用的短语为"it is one's duty to do sth 做…是某人的责任"．这句话意为：作为学生，我认为努力建设一个和谐校园是我们的责任．
高分句型二：
What's more，we should care for each other and help those in need．
句中短语有"what's more 再者，而且"、"care for 照顾"、"in need 在困难中的"．这句话意为：再者，我们应该彼此照顾并帮助需要帮助的人．

解答 Dear editor，
       Our country calls for everyone to try their best to build a harmonious society．As a student，I think it's our duty to work hard to build a harmonious school．【高分句型一】What can we do to achieve the goal？（开篇点题）
       First of all，we should try our best to protect the school environment．We are supposed to  plant more trees and flowers to make our school more beautiful．We should pick up the litter on the road and throw it into the dustbin．We mustn't pick flowers or step on the grass．Second，we should fill the world with love，we should show respect to our teachers．What's more，we should care for each other and help those in need．【高分句型二】The most important point is that all of us must be honest in our daily life．Finally，we should obey the school rules and play an active part in school activies．（提出建议）
        Let's start right now to build a harmonious school．（发出倡议）
Yours，
Zhao Ming

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