Question

【题目】写作。

假如你是刘东，你打算在寒假里做一些有意义的事，请你根据下面的提示，给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，谈谈你的打算。

要求：1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；2. 行文流畅、表达准确、书写规范；

3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；

4. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

How are you? The winter holiday is coming. For this holiday, I plan to________________

______________________________________________________________________________________

All the best!

Yours,

Liu Dong

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

How are you? The winter holiday is coming. I have many plans. For this holiday, I plan to do some shopping to buy my favorite fruits and snacks. Because the Spring Festival is coming, I will prepare some delicious food and beautiful clothes to enjoy the festival. And I will buy some presents for my parents. I plan to visit my friends and watch TV, especially the shows I like best. Above all, I will read some famous works to enrich my horizon. It must be interesting and meaningful.

How are you spending your winter holiday? Please write to me soon.

All the best!

Yours,

Liu Dong

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，刘东写信给汤姆介绍自己寒假的计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时和一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I plan to..., I will…,It must be…,How are you…?等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了寒假将至，自己有很多计划，接下来介绍我的具体计划：购物，准备美食过春节，看望朋友，看电视，读书，最后询问汤姆的寒假计划。此处plan to do sth, do some shopping, buy sth for sb, above all等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。