题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是英国交换生 Tom Green (15 岁,已在建湖生活了一年,会说中文),建湖图书馆正在招募英语志愿者,你希望成为其中一员,帮助小孩子学会阅读英文原版绘本(English original picture books),你每周六有空参与志愿者活动。请依据下列图表给工作人员写一封 申请信。 注意:1、可以适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。 2、词数100左右(开头结尾已经写 好,不计入总词数);
Tom Green
personal information personal advantage personal promise
… English a book lover … Saturday …
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m an exchange student from the UK.
Yours
Sincerely
Tom Green
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm an exchange student from the UK, I am writing to you about volunteering in your library. My name is Tom Green, I am a boy of fifteen. I’ve lived in Jianhu for about a year.
As an exchange student, I'm good at English and I can also speak Chinese well. I’m a book lover, In my free time, I like to read all kinds of books. Besides, I'm warm-hearted and always ready to help others, so I think I’d be good at this job.
I’d like to help kids learn to read English original picture books. I will enjoy sharing my ideas with children who come to the library. I can work once a week, I am free to help on Saturdays.
I really want to join you, please give me the chance, thank you very much! I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours Sincerely
Tom Green
【解析】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如from the UK,write to sb.,a boy of fifteen,live in,like to do,all kinds of,be good at,be ready to help others,I’d like to,enjoy doing,once a week,join sb.,look forward to等。而并列句My name is Tom Green, I am a boy of fifteen /As an exchange student, I'm good at English and I can also speak Chinese well.和复杂从句结构Besides, I'm warm-hearted and always ready to help others, so I think I’d be good at this job./ At first, I got so nervous that I felt awful all over./I hope I can be a good doctor, so I can cure my patients and release them from painful diseases./ The person I admire most is Lei Feng.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。