Question

书面表达，假如你是David，今年暑假，你去北京游玩了．请根据下面表格中的提示信息，给你在美国的网友Frank写一封邮件，介绍一下此次游玩的情况．要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，中心突出：80词寿右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数．

时间	今年暑假
地点	北京
参加者	你和父母亲
天气	晴，热
活动
感受

Dear Frank,

How was your vacation ? Please write back to me soon．

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Yours,

David

 

Answer 1

Sunday, May Day

It was sunny, but a little windy. I went to visit some famous places in Beijing with my parents. We went to the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and Tiantan. We had a great time.

We had meat, fish, vegetables and fruit for dinner. The food was delicious. We were tired but happy when we got to the hotel in the evening.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: It was sunny, but a little windy. 天气晴朗，但有点风。I We were tired but happy when we got to the hotel in the evening. 在晚上我们到了酒店时，我们很累但很高兴。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。