Question

14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号^，并在其下面写出该增加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．没处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2．在答题卡的第六节的题上答题．
3．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When I was a baby，my parents often gave me a hug，took me to play on the vegetable garden and took many photo of me，because they cared about my safety and kept me away from any hurt．While I was growing up，they give me more and more"love"，and I thought it began to hurt me．When I was student，they often told me many rules．For example，I wasn't allowed to use me mobile phone．However，I thought I was old enough to do what I wanted to，so I often talked back to them angry．Later，my teacher has several conversations with us．Finally，we came to know that we really loved each other，but the way to get along with each other was not correct．I regretted for treating them like that．They gave me much chances to make my own decisions．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要讲述：作者小时候，父母经常给我拍照并且小心照顾我，让我远离伤害．当我逐渐长大的时候，发现他们给我越来越多的爱，我开始觉得他们在伤害我．当我是学生的时候，他们经常制定给我好多规则．例如，不允许我使用手机．然而我认为我足够大的做我想做的事情，因此我经常生气地和他们顶嘴．不久，我的老师已经和我们谈话好几次．最后我们开始知道我们真的很爱彼此，但是我们相互沟通的方式不对．我后悔我那样对待他们．他们给了我很多机会做自己的决定．

解答 1．on----in；考查介词用法，在菜园里，用介词in．
2．photo----photos；考查名词用法，拍许多照片，用photo的复数形式photos．
3．give---gave；考查动词用法，while引导的状语从句，前后时态要一致，主句要用一般过去时态，故用give的过去式gave．
4．and----but； 考查连词的用法，根据前后语境，他们给了我越来越多的爱，"但是"我认为它开始伤害我了．故用连词but．
5．When I was student--When I was a student； 考查冠词用法，表示泛指，一个 使用冠词"a"．
6．use me mobile phone-----use my mobile phone； 考查代词用法，根据句意使用"我的"，名词前面使用形容词性物主代词，故用my．
7．I often talked back to them angry---I often talked back to them angrily； 考查副词用法，根据语境，我经常"生气地"和他们顶嘴，修饰动词用副词，故用angrily．
8．my teacher has several conversations with us-----my teacher had several conversations with us； 考查动词用法，根据语境，我的老师和我们谈话好几次．与…谈话have conversation with…，且陈述的是过去的事情用一般过去时态，故填had．
9．I regretted for treating them like that----I regretted treating them like that； 考查动词用法，regret to do sth．遗憾还没有做；regret doing sth 后悔做过某事，根据句意后悔那样对待他们，故填doing，去掉介词for．
10．They gave me much chances---They gave me many chances；考查many的用法，chance 机会，是可数名词，表示"很多"修饰可数名词用many，故把much 改为many．

点评 短文改错题，考生注意结合词语用法和语境，以及语法知识找出错误并改正．