Question

【题目】目前广场舞的话题非常热。有些人认为：广场舞能丰富人们的生活，促进身心健康；有些人认为：广场舞的音乐声给周边市民带来了麻烦，影响了晚间休息。请选择一个观点结合你的经历简略谈谈你的看法。
Suggested phrases:
enrich people's life;
bring trouble

Answer 1

【答案】Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China . Not only is it a good way of keeping fit , but also it is a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to meet and make friends .

Most dancers say that this activity makes them look younger and feel more confident . At the same time , square dancing enrich their life .

However , they make so much noise that people around feel uncomfortable . What is worse , sometimes they even fight for a certain place to dance .

In my opinion , we should encourage more old women to take part in this outdoor activity . Meanwhile , they aren't supposed to dance too late or to too loud music in order not to bring trouble..

【解析】这是一篇话题作文，主题是关于广场舞，我们需要介绍不同人对广场舞的观点，并结合自己的经历谈谈你的看法。短文的主要内容分为三个部分：首先介绍广场舞以及它现在的流行程度；其次介绍支持广场舞的观点及原因以及反对广场舞的观点及原因；最后来发表自己的观点。写作时，首先要注意文章内容的完整，需要将上面的这些内容都用英语表达出来；其次要注意文章结构的完整，最好分段来写，观点要明确，不能含糊。同时在文章中还需要注意恰当的表达，准确运用英语词汇和语法，使用一些高级词汇和句型，增强文章的表现力。句子之间注意连接，使文意连贯。