Question

【题目】书面表达

根据要求完成大作文。词数：80词左右。

为了增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

注意：

1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；

2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：be careful， on line， danger， call…for， go bad

How to keep safe

As teenagers， we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First， _____________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

How to keep safe

As teenagers， we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First， we should be careful when we make friends， especially on line. Second， if we are in danger， we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also， we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least， summer is coming， and we must remember it is dangerous to swim alone in the river.

In short， safety must come first!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意表达的调理性及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作两点：这篇是一篇优秀的范文，字数符合要求，要点齐全，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；文中使用了连词First， Second， Also， Last but not least，，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。