Question

书面表达（15分）

虽然目前过洋节已经成为一种时尚，但随着民族精神教育的深入开展，传统的中国节越来越受到重视。假如你叫沈爱华，请你给你的美国笔友John写一封80词左右的信，邀请他来中国感受中国风俗文化，并向他介绍你最喜欢的中国节日。文章首句已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：red packet 红包、压岁钱 set off firecrackers 放鞭炮

Dear John,

How is it going? You asked about Chinese festivals in you last letter. There are many Chinese traditional festivals in China. _______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Dear John,

How is it going? You asked about Chinese festivals in you last letter. There are many Chinese traditional festivals in China. The Spring Festival, Chinese New Year is the most important festival for all of us. It’s my favourite festival. All family members get together on New Year Eve to have a big meal. Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So during the fifteen days, we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets from their grandparents, parents, uncles and aunts. They set off firecrackers, wear new clothes and have many interesting activities. Would you please come to China and spend the festival with me? Write soon.

Yours,

Shen Aihua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍自己最喜欢的中国传统节日和在那时的活动。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如All family members get together on New Year Eve to have a big meal. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets from their grandparents, parents, uncles and aunts.有一些好的固定短语还有连词。

考点：命题类作文。