Question

【题目】书面表达

为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。

1.慎重交友 2.遇险报警 3.安全饮食 4. 其他(1-2点)

注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；

2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

3)词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：be careful， on line， danger， call...for， go bad

How to keep safe? As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First，__________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

As teenagers， we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.

First， we should be careful when we make friends， especially on line.

Second， if we are in danger， we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.

Also， we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health.

Last but not least， summer is coming， and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.

In short， safety must come first !

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。题中规定了写作要点，那么这些要点在文中都要有所体现。所写的是一篇演讲稿，可以用第一人称来写，更富有感染和号召力。时态可以用一般现在时。文中可以适当加入一些连词，例如各个要点可以用一些增加层次结构的词。文中已经给出了first首先，那么后面的写作中可以沿用second，third等。

写作亮点：这篇文章要点齐全，结构完整，表达流畅。文中各个要点用了一些连词，如First首先；second第二；also还有；last but not least最后但同样重要的；In short总的来说。另外，文中用了一些复合句，if we are in danger， we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.如果我们处于危险，要及时报警求救来保证自己的安全。we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.我们必须记得在河里游泳 是危险的。