Question

【题目】书面表达

帮助他人，快乐自己。李华一家常在周末去社区参加志愿者活动。假如你是李华的同学，请根据提供的信息描述他们上周六所做的事，你对他们的做法有何感想？你是否愿意参与类似的活动？说明理由。

人物	爸爸	妈妈	李华	你
活动	为邻居修理（fix）电脑	为社区老人包粽子	教孩子下棋	……

要求：

1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。

2.评价李华一家的做法：表达你的意愿，并说明理由。

3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名及地点。

4. 文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work. Last Saturday, his family went there again and did something for others. His father checked and fixed computers for neighbors. His mother made zongzi for the elderly people there. Li Hua taught some kids to play chess.

I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer like Li Hua. I will clean the house for the old people.

As we know, helping others is helping ourselves. It can also bring happiness to us all.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以李华同学的身份，介绍一下李华一家周末经常去社区参加志愿者活动的情况以及上周六他们一家去社区的具体活动情况，并表达自己对李华一家的做法的看法。短文用第三人称形式，经常去社区的活动情况用一般现在时态，上周六的活动用一般过去时态。表述自己的看法用第一人称，用一般现在时态。

写作亮点：短文的第一段介绍李华一家的职业及爱好；第二段描述上周六他们全家在社区所做的志愿服务活动；第三段表明自己对李华一家行为的看法。条理清楚，层次分明。短文最后：帮助别人就是帮助我们自己，它能给我们带来快乐。点明主旨，升华主题。