Question

8．初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大．就此问题，你在英语课上做了一个以"Less Pressure Makes Life Better"为题的值日报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验，内容包括：
普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试
我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习
我成功缓解压力的方法及效果：…
要求：1、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2、词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Less Pressure Makes Better Life　　
Hello，my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world．Most students in our class are under too much pressure．
Some students can't get on well with their classmates，while others may worry about their exams too much．
I was always under pressure，too．My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class．They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends．
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best．Finally，they understood me．In this way，I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies．
   Less pressure makes better life．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some students can't①get on well with their classmates，②while others may worry about their exams too much．一些学生不能和他们的同学相处得很好，而其他人可能会非常担心他们的考试．
①get on well with sb与某人相处融洽
②whlie为连词，连接前后两个句子，表前后的对比．
高分句型二：
In this way，I feel less stressed out ①so that I can ②concentrate more on my studies．这样，我感到压力少了，所以我可以集中精力在我的学习上．
①so that"以致于"，引导目的状语从句
②concentrate on专心于，把思想集中于

解答 One possible version：
Less Pressure Makes Better Life　　
Hello，my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world．Most students in our class are under too much pressure．Some students can't get on well with their classmates，while others may worry about their exams too much．【高分句型一】【普遍存在的压力】
I was always under pressure，too．My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class．They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends．【我过去的压力】
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best．Finally，they understood me．In this way，I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies．【高分句型二】【我成功缓解压力的方法及效果】
Less pressure makes better life．Thank you!

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．