Question

16．现在社会上对90后有些评论，认为他们自私，迷恋网络，缺乏责任心，不会与人交流等，针对这些评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论．作为90后的一员，请参考下列提示词写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你．（开头和结尾已给出）
参考词汇：selfish（自私的），Internet（网络），responsible（有责任心的），high ideals（崇高理想）
As we know，most of us are the only child in our families now．Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us，which make us become selfish．Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others．
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well．
We teenagers have high ideals．We always believe in ourselves and never say"die"．Meanwhile we are in style．New ideas can be easily accepted by us．You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life．We also know how to respectour parents and teachers．
We are growing up．We are sure to do better．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us我们的父母非常爱我们，他们尽力为我们做一切．try one's best to do sth．尽某人最大努力做某事
【高分句型二】
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well毫无疑问，我们也有自己的优势．There is no doubt that毫无疑问．

解答 As we know，most of us are the only child in our families now．Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us【高分句型一，注意try one's best to do sth的使用】，which make us become selfish．Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others．【要点一，现在社会上对90后有些评论，认为他们自私，迷恋网络，缺乏责任心，不会与人交流等】
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well．【高分句型二，注意There is no doubt that的使用】
We teenagers have high ideals．We always believe in ourselves and never say"die"．Meanwhile we are in style．New ideas can be easily accepted by us．You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life．We also know how to respect our parents and teachers．【要点二，我们的优点】
We are growing up．We are sure to do better．

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