Question

【题目】假设某中学生英文报开展关于青少年生活状况的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Teenagers need to change为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述青少年生活状况并提出建议。

现状	学习	学业繁重；考前担忧（或自拟内容）
	饮食	零食不断；拒绝果蔬（或自拟内容）
	出行	无视交规；乱丢垃圾（或自拟内容）
	其它	（请考生自拟一点内容）
建议	如何改变现状（请考生各自拟一点内容）

注意：

1. 表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Teenagers need to change

Nowadays, teenagers have plenty of problems in their everyday lives.__________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, teenagers have plenty of problems in their everyday lives. They have too much homework to do both at school and at home, others may worry about their exams. Their eating habits are not good, some of them often eat snacks, and refuse to eat vegetables and fruits. I know some teenagers don’t obey the traffic rules and throw rubbish everywhere when they go out. Even worse, some of them are crazy about playing computer games. I think teenagers should think of ways to deal with these problems. Firstly, they should make a plan for study and find time to relax as much as possible. Secondly, they must eat healthy food to keep healthy. Thirdly, in order to be safe and protect the environment, they must obey the traffic rules and stop throwing the rubbish. At last, in my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the computer in their free time, go out to take some exercise, play some sports and visit some friends. In a word, they must develop a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据提纲可知，人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

写作亮点：本文按照写作要求，根据汉语提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰，特别是一些副词的运用，比如：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly,等，使语意更加连贯，层次分明。并依据要求，提出了自己的观点In a word, they must develop a healthy lifestyle.