Question

【题目】Write at least 60 words about the topic “That time, I really felt worried”(请以“那一次，我真的感到很担心”为题， 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文， 标点符号不占格)

在你的学习和生活中，你一定解决过一度令你感到担心的事情，请你描述担心的事情是什么，为什么担心以及最后又如何解决的。

（注意： 文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其相关信息，否则不予评分）

Answer 1

【答案】That time, I really felt worried

When I was in Grade 7, I went to a new school because my family moved to a new town. I was a little shy. So I was worried about how I could get along with my new classmates and teachers. I worried that I can’t get used to teachers’ new ways of teaching. I also worried that I couldn’t make new friends there. On the night before the school started, my mom came to my room, sat on the bed and told me, “There is no need to worry. When you are friendly to people around you, they will be friendly to you. Believe in yourself.” Listening to these words, I had some courage. That day came. When I entered the classroom, I saw many smiling faces. I felt relaxed at once. The teacher were also very kind. I thought I was lucky.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以That time, I really felt worried为题，介绍自己的学习和生活中碰到的一件令自己感到很担心的事情。通过审题可知，作文中应主要包括以下内容，首先介绍一下让你担心的事情是什么；接下来说明原因；最后介绍自己是如何解决的。写作时，应围绕这三个部分的内容，组织语言，补充更多的细节信息，串联成文。短文应主要使用一般过去时，第一人称叙述，注意谓语动词应变为过去式形式，尤其应注意不规则动词过去式的变化。表达时应注意英语句式结构的特点以及与汉语在表达习惯上的差别，不要写汉语式的英语。首先句子结构应完整，可以使用较常见的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构；也可使用并列句和复合句的复杂结构，如用and，but，so等并列连词或者状语从句、定语从句等复合句。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，表达流畅。