Question

【题目】 童年是人生最美好的时光。小时候你一定接收了许多心爱的礼物，你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？请你以“My favorite gift”为题写一篇80至100词的英语短文。

要求：行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写規范；依据提示可适度发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名。

My favorite gift

My favorite gift from childhood is __________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My favorite gift

My favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday.

I like it very much because it is so cute. It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.

The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I don't want to give it up, but to be honest, I have to. Because I'm getting older!

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你的心爱礼物。主要从：你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

It's special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. 这对我来说很特别，因为我几乎每天都在玩，直到十岁。

句子because I used to play with it almost every day是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我记得当我六岁的时候，没有它我永远不会去睡觉。

句子when I was six years old是由when引导的时间状语从句。