Question

【题目】 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic" My dear mother, I want to tell…”(以“我亲爱的妈妈，我想告诉你…”为题写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

(注意:短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及相关信息，否则不予评分。)

提示:在日常生活中，妈妈给了我们无微无至的关怀，有时也有小小的烦恼。请对妈妈说出一句你最想说的话，并阐述理由，或结合你的经历谈谈体会

Answer 1

【答案】例文：

My dear mother, I want to tell you I love you

In my heart, my mother is my sun. Without my mother’s care, I couldn’t grow up well. I want to tell my mother I love you.

I remember when I was a child, the school held an English speech contest, I also took part in it. I thought my English is good, I can win the championship, but in the competition, I was so nervous that I made mistakes on the platform. As a result, I didn’t win the championship. I was so sad that I cried. After that, I lost interest in English, I didn’t want to learn English any more, and I didn't want to communicate with others in English. But my mother encouraged me. She made me face up to my mistakes and learn from my mistakes. She also taught me some ways to overcome my nervousness. With my mother’s encouragement, I finally won the championship in the later competition.

Without my mother, I wouldn’t have stood up again and won the championship. I love my mother because she is the best mom in the world. Thank you mum!

【解析】

1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。首先要把作文题目补充完整，然后以题目为主线，展开描写。可以通过描写自己的亲身经历，衬托出要对妈妈说的这句话，重点是要把事情描写清楚。