Question

【题目】根据提示，请以My Life in Ten Years 为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

My Life in Ten Years

Answer 1

【答案】My life in ten years

In ten years, I think I’ll be a reporter. I would like to work in BeiJing because I will probably find a better job there.I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and go to other places on business.I will live in an apartment where I can enjoy talks with my sister，because I don’t like living alone. Also I am going to learn about news, history, geography and so on during the college.

So in ten years, my dream of being a reporter will hopefully come true and I can be working as a reporter.Until then, I will have many different pets, such as a pet cat. I think I will be doing shopping with my sister as long as I have time. During my vacation I will travel to London. So my life in ten years will be better and better.

Do you believe the life in ten years of mine is so wonderful?

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如would like to do，a lot of，on business，live in，enjoy sth.，talk with，be going to，come true，as a reporter，do shopping，as long as，go to travel，be better and better等。而I would like to work in BeiJing because I will probably find a better job there./ I will live in an apartment where I can enjoy talks with my sister，because I don’t like living alone. / I think I will be doing shopping with my sister as long as I have time.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。