Question

【题目】书面表达

中国日报（China Daily）决定举行一次以“我的笔友”为题的英语征文比赛。假如你的笔友是David，请结合以下的要点写一篇100字左右的短文，可适当发挥。文章的开头已给出，不计入字数。

身份	15岁，八年级，就读于林地学校(Woodland School),既是我的偶像又是我的好友。
外貌	棕色的头发，明亮而笑眯眯的眼睛，是班里的尖子生。
性格	（1）幽默，---- （2） 慷慨，----
学习	在班上学习最刻苦。法语说得相当好。总是认真聆听同学的问题，并主动给他们提供帮助。
爱好	1.喜爱旅行。花许多时间环游世界。去年游览了长城，世界上最大的城市广场---天安门广场，还去了中国的其他名胜。
	2.喜欢自己动手制作,并阅读了很多有关DIY的书。上个月，自己为母亲制作了一张带有玫瑰花的卡片。
理想	长大后想----， 因为---- ----（自由发挥一句）

My penfriend

I want to tell you about my penfriend named David. ____________

Answer 1

【答案】My penfriend

I want to tell you about my penfriend named David. He is 15 years old. He is in Grade eight in woodland school. He is both my idol and good friend. He has brown hair and bright, smiling eyes. He is the top student in the class. He is both humorous and generous. He studies hardest in his class. He speaks French quite well. He always listens to his classmates' questions carefully and offers them help .

David loves traveling and spends much time traveling around the world. Last year, he visited the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square---the largest city square in the world, and other places of interest in China. In addition, he also likes to make his own, and reads a lot of books about DIY. Last month, he made a card with roses for his mother.

He wants to be a pilot when he grows up, because he wants to get around the world.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如want to do，both…and，listen to，offer them help，like to do，spend much time doing，around the world，places of interest，in addition，a lot of，grow up等。而He always listens to his classmates' questions carefully and offers them help on his own initiative./ In addition, he also likes to make his own, and reads a lot of books about DIY.等并列句和He wants to be a pilot when he grows up, because he wants to get around the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。