Question

请以“ The happy life ”为题，根据以下的内容描述一下你现在的幸福生活和对未来的憧憬。

内容提示：1学校生活乐趣多，和同学一起学习，相处融洽。

2希望将来有个喜欢的好的工作。

3现在努力学习，希望梦想成真。

要求80字左右，内容丰富，自由发挥，不涉及真实姓名。

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Answer 1

The Happy Life

My school life has a lot of fun. I like studying in the classroom with my lovely classmates. We get on well

with each other. We play sports and sing songs together. But sometimes there is too much homework. I don't

have free time to play with my pet. I wish to have a job I like and have a house with a garden.

I will share my success with my parents. Now, I must study hard to make my dream come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。首先要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。然后根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容完整，能根据提示表达清楚所有的要点，能合理的运用连词，如But，较高级的句式，如I wish to have a job I like and have a house with a garden使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。