Question

5．1、请你简单谈谈学校的规章制度．
要求：1.80-90字左右．
2．以"The school rules"为标题．
The school rules                                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think young people should look smart and so I'd like to wear my own clothes我认为年轻人应该看起来漂亮所以我想要穿自己的衣服．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
If we have to wear uniforms，we should be allowed to design our own uniforms如果我们必须要穿校服，我们应该允许设计自己的校服．
if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 The school rules
We have a lot of school rules at our school．And we aren't allowed to break the rules．I think some of the rules are necessary．For example，students must listen carefully in class and finish homework carefully．And we aren't allowed to make noise in library．We have to be friendly to classmates．It's helpful to get along with classmates．（校规）
At our school we have to wear uniforms every day．The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly．I think young people should look smart and so I'd like to wear my own clothes．【高分句型一】If we have to wear uniforms，we should be allowed to design our own uniforms．【高分句型二】That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy．（感受）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．