Question

17．五一节那天，你告诉你的父母，你要和你的同学一起出去到河边闲逛，放松一下自己．但你的母亲不同意，她叫你呆在家里，为考试做准备．你在家不能够集中精力学习．请根据汉语提示和后面的提示词，写一篇80词左右的短文，讲述事情的经过、你母亲不同意后你所做的事情，以及你的感受．
提示词：call      learn by heart   disappointed
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is important for me to relax．
句中使用句式为：it is+形容词+for sb to do sth．这句话意为：对我来说休息很重要．
高分句型二：
If I don't have a good rest，I will be too tired to learn well．
句中"If I don't have a good rest"为条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则．"too…to…"意为"太…而不能…"．这句话意为：如果我不能好好休息，我会太累而学不好．

解答 On May the first，I told my parents that I wanted to hang out with my classmates near the river．I wanted to relax myself．But my mother didn't agree with me．She told me to stay at home and study for the test．So I called my classmate and told him that I could not go out with him．Then I had to study in my room．I tried to learn something by heart，but I couldn't concentrate on my study，I felt very boring and disappointed．（事情的经过）
I think my mother shouldn't do that．It is important for me to relax．【高分句型一】If I don't have a good rest，I will be too tired to learn well．【高分句型二】（我的感受）

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