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2．我们的家乡正在发生着日新月异的变化，为配合我区举办的"礼仪门头沟（Charm Mentougou）"活动的开展，请你以"How to behave well？"为主题，写一篇不少于60词的英语作文参赛．
内容包括：1．守时，不说脏话；2．礼貌待人，热心助人；3．遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4…
注意：1．文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2．内容可适当扩展．
How to behave well？
As a student in Mentougou，we should behave well．（开篇点题）
First，I think it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises．【高分句型一】Never lie to others or say dirty words．Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need．Then we'd better not talk loudly in public．Don't throw litter everywhere．And remember to obey traffic rules．Finally，learn to work withothers．We need good team work in our life．（提出建议）
If we do like this，ourhometown will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（总结全文）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，I think it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises．
句中"it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises"为宾语从句，使用句式为：it is+形容词+to do sth．这句话意为：首先，我认为做事情守时并遵守诺言很重要．
高分句型二：
If we do like this，our hometown will become more and more beautiful．
句中"If we do like this"为条件状语从句，句中短语有"比较级+and+比较级 越来越…"．这句话意为：如果我们这样做，我们的家乡会变得越来越漂亮．

解答 How to behave well？
As a student in Mentougou，we should behave well．（开篇点题）
First，I think it's very important to do everything on time and keep promises．【高分句型一】Never lie to others or say dirty words．Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need．Then we'd better not talk loudly in public．Don't throw litter everywhere．And remember to obey traffic rules．Finally，learn to work withothers．We need good team work in our life．（提出建议）
If we do like this，our hometown will become more and more beautiful．【高分句型二】（总结全文）

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