Question

1．下面是大林写给他朋友Jim的信，信中描述了他的烦恼．请以他朋友Jim的身份给他回信，给他指出问题，提出建议、不少于60词．信的开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Jim，
I have many problems these days．First，I had a fight with my younger sister，my parents was angry with me．That made me very sad．Then，I borrowed a new pen from my best friend Wang Qiang．Unluckily，I broke it by accident．That made Wang Qiang unhappy．What should I do？Can you help me？
Yours，Daling
Dear Daring，
I am very sorry to hear that you have so many problems．                                      
Yours，
Jim．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I am very sorry to hear that you have so many problema．我听说你有这么多的问题，很抱歉．be sorry to do sth抱歉做某事，so many 如此多．
②Don't forget that you are a boy--a little man．别忘了你是个男孩．句子中Don't 引导的是祈使句的否定句，直接在句首加Don't；that you are a boy--a little man作forget的宾语，构成宾语从句．

解答 Dear Dalin，
I am very sorry to hear that you have so many problems．（高分句型）Don't worry too much，I have some advice here．（引出话题）First，you should be kind to your sister，have a talk with your parents，and say sorry to them．Don't forget that you are a boy--a little man．（高分句型）You shouldn't fight with a girl．Second，you can buy a new pen for your good friend．He may love his new pen friend very much．If you give a new pen to him．He can be happy again．And you can be good friends again too．（给Dalin的两条建议）
Hope my advice can be helpful．Good luck to you．（祝愿）

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．